“Pickle-like”

This is another internship update at the foundation. Lately, I’ve been working on things like invitation, a logo, an illustrations, and other misc. things. I was working on this illustration of a gator coming out of an egg last week and I finally got some feedback this week, and this is an excerpt from it, “Also, could the gator head be defined a bit more gator and not so pickle-like?”

This must be the most amusing comment I’ve ever received on my work. BUT, here’s my illustration… you can be the judge! :]

After that comment, I’ve changed it to this. Not much difference in terms of the forms but I think I like this better.